Last post, I talked about characterization in a single,
specific case and applied the generalization as a rule. Obviously, it's a
generalization, and won't work for everyone or in every case. That's the nature
of generalizations. It's a lot like
profiling and valid only as long as its guiding tenants hold true.
Which, as I figure it, is a 50/50 chance.
But there's one aspect of characterization that holds true
most of the time. And I say most of
the time, because I think there's only one rule in writing that's true 100% of
the time: no verb, no sentence. Don't ask me to explain that one, though. I
couldn't diagram a sentence if my dinner or my life depended on it. You'll just
have to trust me.
No, the rule I'm referring to is that we, as writers, have
to make our characters "real." I'm sure you’ve heard that one before.
It seems to be a core tenet of creative writing. Think on it and consider how
many times you've heard that one preached. Personally, more times than I can
count.
Yet, I can't stand this rule. It just doesn't work for me.
Hear me out, now. I can see you scoffing and questioning my credibility. Not
that I haven't made some bold claims before now. Well, I don't think of them as
bold, but rather as questioning what I see as the blindly accepted rules of
basic writing. Or something like that. Take it for what you will.
I'll let my finished writing stand for itself.
Anyway, what I have issue with is the absoluteness of the
rule, that we must follow this rule at all times when designing characters.
It's unconditional. But I have a single question for you:
What is the
definition of real?
By that, I mean what is real and what is false? Is Clifford
real? You know Clifford, The Big Red Dog. What about Elrond Half-Elven? Harry
Potter? Marty McFly? Shawn Spencer? Bruce Wayne? The list goes on. Is Garfield
any less real than the Corleone family or Jake Blues?
Hopefully, I've set up a rhetorical question. Perhaps not.
But are any of these characters real or even realistic? The Corleones are
realistic enough, in a literal sense, with Marty McFly and Jake Blues trailing
just behind. But what about the others? Magical characters don’t exist; elves
don't live among us. And a rich man pretending to be a bat? At least dogs are
real, though not so large. And definitely not so red.
But each character is real enough. Important difference,
that. I feel it's necessary to mention the difference between real, real
enough, and, as I think of it, real within a form.
Real should be
easy enough for us to understand. These characters are real in a very physical sense
and fit the finite, specific definition of the rule. Their actions, responses,
and options apply within the physics of this universe. There's no cure for
death. A thrown ball has certain demands on it that must be met. Reactions are
finite. It all has to make sense. This is what we all strive for. This is the
world that Hemingway, Cather, and Woolf introduced to us. We understand it and
grasp it inherently.
Real enough is
what I consider all those people trying to sell us stuff on TV. The walk-off
role. Do we care about their motivations or how they'll react to an alien
invasion of lower Manhattan? No. What we want from them is the momentary interaction,
and then they can disappear back into the mold that created them. And that's
about all we care for them, too. As long as they react believably, we're good.
They really don't even apply to the rule, but I mention them only for the sake
of being thorough.
Then there's the final type: real within a form. Okay, I
could use another term for them, too: stereotypes. This ran rampant in early
cinema, but it predates that. Look back at Shakespeare. It's ALL stereotypical.
Every play. Doesn't make it less fun, though.
The thing is, we still use stereotypes in our writing.
Sherlock Holmes. John McClain. Every sitcom father ever. We're okay with that,
too. Otherwise, explain the success of The
Big Bang Theory. The characters are all stereotypes.
I recently asked my wife if my characters in The Red Dress were realistic. She said
no and I felt horrible. Then she went on to say that they're not meant to be. Extremely
realistic characters wouldn't work in that book. It's too stylized. Insert the
characters from The Walking Dead into
The Big Bang Theory.
Not working for you either?
Then I’ve made my point. As writers, we need to be aware of
how well our characterization fits within both the world we create and the
style we write. Real is relative.
Making characters real doesn't have to be all about making them EXACTLY TRUE TO LIFE. Stereotypes often make characters just as believable. I think "real" is more about being "relatable" than anything else. ?? :)
ReplyDeleteIt's more than that though. Relatable is all fine and good (but can you relate to Marty McFly? I don't have a time machine {Now I want a time machine!}), but it goes deeper than that.
DeletePeople have finite actions they can take depending on the physics of the world. Characters have to stay true to those physics. Real is a misnomer since those physics can change. What we want is, based upon the rules we (the authors) have created, believable reactions. Maybe not real, but believable and accurate.