Wednesday, April 15, 2015

BlogBattle Silver

Rachael Ritchey just kept on like dog with a bone in its teeth, and has finally succeeded.  Short stories aren't my thing, but this week I actually tossed another story into the mix for her #BlogBattle.  This week's theme is "Silver".
 
Enjoy.
 
 
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His breath came heavy, his sight grew dim, but the end was in sight. Leg muscles burned with the effort, but he’d trained for this. It wasn’t just about endurance, but about the ability to ignore the pain, to push through it. To push beyond it and strive for greatness.
 
Now that greatness was within sight. A meer two hundred yards. Each pump of his legs brought him closer and closer. No one was in sight. The track ahead was all his. His mind drifted to all the races which had led him here.
 
One hundred yards. There was Tommy, the fastest kid at Harrison Elementary. Angie Landford, the girl who had bested everyone during her four years of track at Adams High School, his alma mater’s crosstown rivals. Then he’d beaten her. He’d been the most popular kid at school for weeks.
 
Fifty yards. Victory would taste so sweet. All the effort, all the sweat, blood, toil, and tears. The years of practice in college, the amature circuits, the professional circuits. Now this.
 
Fifteen.
 
No one was there.
 
Ten.
 
It was his!
 
Five.
 
No. No. No! No! That upstart from Canada. There was no way that some kid would take away hismoment of glory. He tried to press harder, but there was nothing left. The ribbon was right there, but he could do nothing about it.
 
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Jonathan Swift, Canada’s poster boy, won Olympic Gold that year in Men’s 500 Meter Sprint.

3 comments:

  1. And I'm happy you like dogs so much, seeing as how you have one for a writing partner. :) Now, next week's #BlogBattle theme word is Blonde and this pooch is holding tight to that bone. Keep stretching those amazing writing muscles with us! <3

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  2. Nice story. :) He came so close to winning!

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  3. You're Nominated! Not to worry, if you don't feel up to fulfilling the rules, I'll give you a pass. Just want you to know I appreciate you and your creativity! Creative Blogger Award

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